Comments of chapter undefined of Return of the Immortal Mage

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It would be great if you could used Double quotes for dialogues. the flow is hard to understand woth out proper punctuations.

3yr

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It will be a problem in starting chapters but as the story progresses this problem is resolved. So read till the end.

3yr