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QATCOD

QATCOD

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I am an author and I just like to write for fun

2020-10-03 JoinedPakistan
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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to MaxAkki

    Jinsang

    The next day Jinrong comes to academy. He walks while being absent minded and is suddenly blended within a crowd he doesn't know why the crowd has collected so he asks a person about it. He replies that she is Wang sixi. She is now of the most beautiful girl in campus and is also 2nd ranked in Imperial academy. So, she is from Wang family and this all ruckus is created by her. Well in my opinion all this ruckus for one person is not worth it.
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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to WhoreMoan

    Well I really don't mind criticisms cause I know that they are due to my own lack of writing skills. And I will improve the earlier chapters I was not able to write because of my exams. Doo now I will rewrite my chapters.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Michael_Crew

    It'll get better after some chapters.

    Ch 9 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 9-- The crowd
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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Arcain2d

    Actually these chapters will be rewritten after 20 or 30 chapters.

    Ch 28 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 28--End of Jin family
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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Arcain2d

    They did not live inside the Jin family mansion due to family issues so they were not killed but they were just a minor supporting character so I didn't feel it suitable to make another entrance but they will come back in upcoming chapters.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to hihixd3

    Well every review is valuable.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to German_Gerona_6536

    I will write it in sometime as I also understand this mistake of mine.

    Ch 1 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 1-- The Return V2
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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to PandaRayne

    Hmmm, Your advice is good and I had already noticed these kind of problems and they will be resolved after sometime as I will rewrite the story when I reach 100 chapter or when this season will be finished.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Chhay_Nauch

    New chapters will be released soon.

    Ch 49 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 49--Arrival at Imperial City
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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Daoist972127

    I am aware of these problems and they will be resolved eventually because I will rewrite the first chapters after 100 chapters and it will not take much time.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Chaoticmike

    If you are reading the beginning chapters then this problem will occur but I solved this problem after some chapters. I will rewrite the chapters after 100 chapters so this issue will end then but if you are reading the newest chapters then this problem is not there as I know.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Meky

    Thanks for your advice I'll follow it.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Meky

    Although I know that there was some mistake in first chapters and I will correct it shortly but I didn't had any experience writing as it was my first novel so these types of mistakes were inevitable but I will correct them as soon as possible. Thank you for your review it will help me a lot in my future writings.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Posted

    Shameless author 5 star review. Even though the first chapter will seem kind of difficult to read but believe me the story will get better as it progresses so please read until the end.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to blue_phoenix

    It will be a problem in starting chapters but as the story progresses this problem is resolved. So read till the end.

    Ch 4 Return of the Immortal mage chapter 4-- Imperial academy entrance exam
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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Gamster07

    Thank you

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Gamster07

    No hard copies are not available for now

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to SomeSpookyGuy

    I usually do write "" but in some sentences it is missed but in the story I usually write it

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to Hassan_Ahmad_3827

    Thank you very much Hassan Ahmad turn your review and your suggestions. I'll definitely work on your suggestions in the future.

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    QATCOD1yr
    Replied to QATCOD

    Tell me

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