I am an author and I just like to write for fun
Well I really don't mind criticisms cause I know that they are due to my own lack of writing skills. And I will improve the earlier chapters I was not able to write because of my exams. Doo now I will rewrite my chapters.
They did not live inside the Jin family mansion due to family issues so they were not killed but they were just a minor supporting character so I didn't feel it suitable to make another entrance but they will come back in upcoming chapters.
Hmmm, Your advice is good and I had already noticed these kind of problems and they will be resolved after sometime as I will rewrite the story when I reach 100 chapter or when this season will be finished.
I am aware of these problems and they will be resolved eventually because I will rewrite the first chapters after 100 chapters and it will not take much time.
If you are reading the beginning chapters then this problem will occur but I solved this problem after some chapters. I will rewrite the chapters after 100 chapters so this issue will end then but if you are reading the newest chapters then this problem is not there as I know.
Although I know that there was some mistake in first chapters and I will correct it shortly but I didn't had any experience writing as it was my first novel so these types of mistakes were inevitable but I will correct them as soon as possible. Thank you for your review it will help me a lot in my future writings.
Shameless author 5 star review. Even though the first chapter will seem kind of difficult to read but believe me the story will get better as it progresses so please read until the end.
Thank you very much Hassan Ahmad turn your review and your suggestions. I'll definitely work on your suggestions in the future.