Really liked the opening and how the story is unfolding the first chapter's characters introduction was really good and liked the story along with the character and the world's background

It seems good and promising liked the starting and hope the story will get more interesting as it goes well there's always room for improvement

Jinsang

Well I really don't mind criticisms cause I know that they are due to my own lack of writing skills. And I will improve the earlier chapters I was not able to write because of my exams. Doo now I will rewrite my chapters.

It'll get better after some chapters.

Actually these chapters will be rewritten after 20 or 30 chapters.

They did not live inside the Jin family mansion due to family issues so they were not killed but they were just a minor supporting character so I didn't feel it suitable to make another entrance but they will come back in upcoming chapters.

Well every review is valuable.

I will write it in sometime as I also understand this mistake of mine.

Hmmm, Your advice is good and I had already noticed these kind of problems and they will be resolved after sometime as I will rewrite the story when I reach 100 chapter or when this season will be finished.

New chapters will be released soon.

I am aware of these problems and they will be resolved eventually because I will rewrite the first chapters after 100 chapters and it will not take much time.

If you are reading the beginning chapters then this problem will occur but I solved this problem after some chapters. I will rewrite the chapters after 100 chapters so this issue will end then but if you are reading the newest chapters then this problem is not there as I know.

Thanks for your advice I'll follow it.

Although I know that there was some mistake in first chapters and I will correct it shortly but I didn't had any experience writing as it was my first novel so these types of mistakes were inevitable but I will correct them as soon as possible. Thank you for your review it will help me a lot in my future writings.

Shameless author 5 star review. Even though the first chapter will seem kind of difficult to read but believe me the story will get better as it progresses so please read until the end.

It will be a problem in starting chapters but as the story progresses this problem is resolved. So read till the end.

Thank you

No hard copies are not available for now

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