Reviews of The Change (book 1 of the change series)
The Change (book 1 of the change series)
Shyxlio
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Little Sis I'm so proud! You did a great job! I was very impressed with your word structure and emotional writing maturity! Keep this up and your going to leave Big Bro behind! LOL
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OMMGG so amazing great job your doing a really great job with this novel.. I hope your pushing your self to the extreme to get your work done. indeed i have to commend you really great job... just do your best ... this books give me mixed emotion something i didnt expect but i should have lol................ bye
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hey there just wanted to tell you that your book is amazing I'm so shocked that its not on top but hey little steps before big steps just work work work work work work...... Try to write as much as you can and then rest don't write STOP write STOP because that wont work not saying your doing that just wanted to give you a word of advise just do your absolute best this book is THE BESTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Writing Quality: I like the well-descriptive scenes, expressions and characters. However, there are some inconsistencies in capitalisation and other minor mistakes which doesn't affect the understanding of the story much. I would recommend the author to break down each paragraphs more, reduce commas and separate conversations from narration. That way, the ease of reading will improve drammatically. Stability of Updates: Daily updates? What more to say? 5 stars! Story Development: The story has an interesting premise of the MC bearing a child of someone influential, coupled with the early tension between characters. I like that. I'm also a fan of some foreshadowing done in some chapters. The story's pacing is a little slow but that's my personal opinion. Try to establish a theme for each chapter that would make your readers engross in the atmosphere of the theme. Character Design: The rapid introduction of multiple characters can cause some confusion betwee characters for the readers. I would recommend the author to establish some familiarisation with a small group of characters before introducing more. This will create characters that will stick into the minds of the readers more easily. World Background: The backgrounds are established early on. The main characters are rich and influential people. Hmm, I have nothing much to say further for this.
