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    Unedited2yr
    Replied to Izumi_Hyoudou76
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    Dark Star C-450
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    Unedited3yr
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    The book is nice not great because I read romance mostly so a personal opinion don't come after me for that lol. The flow is nice . Background perfectly gives the feels of ancient times . Maybe it's supposed to . Who knows ? Kek . Lucifer and old man really are great and I know lucifer shall be hot so to the author. There are three things I don't like First - because I really don't like you for throwing lucifer in the prison Second - I really don't like that Third - I really really don't like you for that Don't take my words too seriously . Don't come after me as I am joking around . The story is really nice give it a try I am sure you guys won't regret it and I am sure the author updates regularly instead of slacking off.

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    God of Adventures
    Fantasy · BRPever
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    Unedited3yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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    I Will Conquer The World!
    Fantasy · DemonsDescent
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    Unedited3yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 BROKEN HEART
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    Till Our Worlds Collide
    Fantasy · Wateristubeg
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    Unedited3yr
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    I like the way it's written and the thinking is amazing. Some places need focus but that's not a major deal. Will be waiting for updates since I like the plot .it's a nice fanfic though .[img=recommend]

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    Snowflake in the Sea
    Fantasy · PaigeBStorey
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    Unedited3yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Destinies Can Be Chosen
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    The Maid’s Daughter
    Fantasy · marichat_nettenoir
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    Unedited3yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 The marriage
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    His Accountant Princess
    Urban · ZOA
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    Unedited3yr
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    It's a nice novel. I only read the first chapter though the writing is good adding this to my library will be waiting for updates [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Reincarnated As A Wolf With Cheats
    Fantasy · 1st_Manga_KING
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    Unedited3yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Prolong
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    Devil's Eyes
    Fantasy · QUEEN_
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    Unedited3yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 1.1 Start of an Adventure
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    Restarting Life In Another World
    Fantasy · BRPever
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    Unedited3yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 A Mad Scientist
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    Rising Against Fate
    Fantasy · BRPever
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    Unedited3yr
    Replied to Xen_120598

    I'll try thinking of good chapter names .I remember I had to do that earlier but I forgot .Give me some time I'll do it .have a good day🙃

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    Silence in the House of Mirrors (On haitus)
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    Unedited3yr
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    To be honest it's great everything is just perfect. I love it. The imagination here is really great. And while reading I can feel each scene happening in front of me. I am really blown away. Not really into these types of novels but this novel has grabbed my attention for sure.

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    Schutzengel
    Fantasy · Nekomata_Shoji
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    Unedited3yr
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    Good story . Way of writing is nice. Flow is good. I suggest a bit of cliffhangers would be nice. I mean if you could make it a bit less obvious. That's all overall I like it. It's a nice one.

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    The Change (book 1 of the change series)
    Urban · Shyxlio
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    Unedited3yr
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    I love the start of the novel. It has a pretty nice pace and fluidity. I am didn't get well along with the first chapter but after that it's awesome . Keep going your writing style is nice too.

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    Awaken Into a New World: Book 1
    Sci-fi · MissCosmos
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    Unedited3yr
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    Hmm maybe it's because I just posted it an hour ago but I'll ask someone about it and yeah I disappeared for a whole month lol

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    Silence in the House of Mirrors (On haitus)
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    Unedited3yr
    Replied to Blurubin

    Hey I won't call you rude. Thanks for pointing out my mistakes I'll definitely work on them 🙂

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    Nothing without You(On Hold)
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    Unedited3yr
    Replied to Heart_Heather

    How is it my fault???

    Ch 6 Chapter 3
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    Nothing without You(On Hold)
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