Comments of chapter undefined of Izayoi: Vector Control(dropped)

I mean, isn't the point of this fanfic is to stomp everybody?

Beat the shit out of those three as well lol, i love how vali was thrown away like trash.

I cant wait for the next chapter it is gonna be epic fight

situations like this i would say start to lean toward a more comedic aspect having a serious character this powerful rapidly kills the fic while this is fun to read if you are having trouble in a sense challenging your MC don't focus less on the seriousness of the character and more on the comedy and or unfortunate events he can't brute force his way out of, its why One Punch Man was such a hit it didn't focus on his strength but more on the actual character itself, if you feel you cannot pull that off or are not experienced enough in comedy to write it i dunno man, i am enjoying the fic and its a nice power trip the only things i could say is slow down on the combat and focus on character development

You can just focus on other things that doesnt involve fighting, the majority of op mc stories take that route Examples being: Learning powers from different worlds like magic ninjitsu haki martial arts etc Romance Adventuring (exploring new worlds and interacting with their characters) Collecting your favorite artifacts Slice of life / comedy

Is this going to have romance? It doesn’t really matter to me im just curious.

I just had a thought mc could fight saitama or maybe someone from dbz/super,just a thought

I see no problem with this story the op mc curb stomping everything is why I come back.

Thanks for the chapter

he is one punch man

Not bad

dont fix it this story is great leave it as is please dont nerf him you will **** the story up if you did that please dont nerf him

I think most of your story is just going to be him getting in to funny and interesting situations from different anime’s and books it seem like it’s mostly the mc messing around which I like. Hope you continue the story and give the next chapter.

More please

for me just do a slice of life adventure, like opm with slapstick and character build ups then you're good

thanks for the chapter

awsome chapter, stomp on sirzechs next

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Nice I always thought that angel deserved a thorough beat down for being such an idiot And a total douch bag.