CyanSuch
Good novel so far. MC isnt stupid Or an Emo loner that lust after every woman he sees. He has a system and actually thinks on which stats he should increase that benefit him instead of spamming charm. He already has a group of friends but dont worry if you think mc will expose all his secrets. Author already confirmed to me that the mc will not tell anyone about his system or share it to help. (I Really hope this stays true all throughout the story) First entertainment, mc will be streaming. Im Enjoying it so far so please Dont drop.
This is a really good book and I like the characters ( cause their personalities and the shit they do are pretty relatable) but if he’s streaming I think it would be great if you just give some highlights of the games like you’re currently doing and if we have fight scenes in the near future don’t extend it for like 7 chapter (like some other books I know of) as it would be a major turnoff. The pace is good and he’s not hunting for pok-cough I mean women so that’s nice. I think there should be a little more world background as we don’t know much about it but it’s nice to read overall and easy on the eyes.
Read till chapter 22. Overall a very good novel. The only problem I have with this novel is that the story until now occurs in 3 or 4 days since Mc's Transmigration. I am not saying that plot progression is slow but it just doesn't feel believable for this much plot progression occurs in first four days. Try doing short time skips (days to weeks but not years). By that I mean, make Mc's Age progression along with plot progression. Spread out plot progression along Mc's schooling & ***** years instead of compacting it by doing plot progression Day by Day. You will be burnt out to write content very quickly. But this is Author's novel. He can do whatever he wants with his novel.
There are few showbiz-centered novels out there that are not Yaoi. There are even fewer that I would actually say are good. This is definitely seeming like it's going to be one of the best. I hope it gets to have long chapter list in the future since the current 30+ chapters feel like an appetizer to a great full course dinner. Cheers!
god I hate romance in this story.mc gets heart broken twice and one time he loved her soo much he probably would have died but then gets feelings for some girl hes known for like 3 days its soo obvious. dont get me wrong Il I like the mc but i dont like the direction of the story and I just cant read it anymore.
That's my very first review, I hope to support this book a bit hehe. The story here is a real hidden gem which brightened my day. It's a light and well written story with lots of bondings. The emotions and the actions of the main character are logic and well explained. There is also the comedy tag which isn't just for show. All that mixed with an achievement system make it a great story. Hope it will keep a stable release. Thanks for your work author and good luck !
This is the best book out there for anyone who likes a good plot with excellent writing and a great MC. I mean seriously how dies this guy feel so real when this is obviously a magical realism work of fiction whatever!! My point Is that you have to read this you will not regret it! Thankyou so much for your womderful work Author:)!! (I also appreciate the lack of haremesque elements)
keep it up. Very entertaining story and dont drop plzzzzz. Its the only reason I am alive i.e I am alive just to read this story, just to be clear. If I dont see regular updates dont blame me for great misfortune will befall you and all your hair will start to fall and u will become bald, not even the good kind of bald just partial bald where only your top will lose hair and it probably looks ugly u know, full bald is good and all but half bald is another thing. Did you know that there are different kinds of baldness and more than 40 % of male population is bald in this world like seriously I think that in soon future everyone will become bald and like our future generation will be born bald..... now that i think about it people are born bald..... see this a premonition that we all will turn bald and return to our roots and all traces of hair will be associated with primitive people that are compared to monkeys So thats why i say that all presidents and office workers should be bald as it goes along with their image and we can separate then and know who is an office worker or an important official if u are still reading this bullshit than hats off to you man, dont you have stuff to do I mean like I am just typing bullshit to reach the word count you know... go on do something productive