Review Detail of Pavan1234 in Reaching For the Stars

Read till chapter 22. Overall a very good novel. The only problem I have with this novel is that the story until now occurs in 3 or 4 days since Mc's Transmigration. I am not saying that plot progression is slow but it just doesn't feel believable for this much plot progression occurs in first four days. Try doing short time skips (days to weeks but not years). By that I mean, make Mc's Age progression along with plot progression. Spread out plot progression along Mc's schooling & ***** years instead of compacting it by doing plot progression Day by Day. You will be burnt out to write content very quickly. But this is Author's novel. He can do whatever he wants with his novel.