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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

PelinSD
PelinSDLv5PelinSD

author please be honest you remembered neville now right ?

PelinSD
PelinSDLv5PelinSD

Thanks for answering dear author :D

Alexander_the_grey:Honestly, i forgot about giving Aedan an opportunity to interact with him in first year. When he fell off his broom. But i couldn’t think of a proper way of getting the two together before this.
Adrianix1234
Adrianix1234Lv14Adrianix1234

I think you forgot to tell neville the speech about his father, should have said something akin “Neville listen to me, You are not your father, you should not try to be your father, you’re Neville, and should try to be better than he ever was, your father’s wand is important to you and to your grandmother but that is all it is, your fathers wand, it’s not yours and sadly it will never be, you need your own wand, one that not only would work better with you but one that will let you grow into being better than your father, one that would make him proud that you’re his son” or something similar to that

commander_pride_21
commander_pride_21Lv5commander_pride_21

dude all your characters arcs feels forced. First example is Harry and MC who you tried to give the feeling of big/little brother between but to me, it felt like the MC trying to force himeslef into Harry's life. Second, in these last few chapters, MC is telling everybody who listens about his backstory and shit and try to make everyone feel sad for him. At least, that's what I felt.

Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6Phoenix1998

he should tell neville to get a new wand and not work with his fathers wand.

An_Anime_Addict
An_Anime_AddictLv14An_Anime_Addict

Author, you do realize that there's no vote option on your novel, right?

Pro_Gamer_161
Pro_Gamer_161Lv4Pro_Gamer_161

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 🤠

Pro_Gamer_161
Pro_Gamer_161Lv4Pro_Gamer_161

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author A Very Very Very Great Novel 😀 With A Fantastic Concept... Pls 🙏 Don't Drop

BlackhawkRookie
BlackhawkRookieLv14BlackhawkRookie

Thanks for the chapter!

Ancient_Reader
Ancient_ReaderLv6Ancient_Reader

Thanks for the chapter :) Considering Neville's parents Psyche'are broken, with their bodies being perfectly healthy, won't occlumency and Legilimency be helpful in healing them? :)

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

Sinjinn
SinjinnLv15Sinjinn

Thanks for the chapter

MikaelDragonsoul
MikaelDragonsoulLv15MikaelDragonsoul

thanks for the chapter

jamasterbator69
jamasterbator69Lv6jamasterbator69

Nice. More please

sfeezor
sfeezorLv15sfeezor

Good chapter

Sierra_Maxwell
Sierra_MaxwellLv3Sierra_Maxwell

I think this would have been a good time to tell Neville about his wand and maybe say he needs a new one because it is not rightfully his and that is why some spells and stuff is harder for him

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

Would be nice if he helps him more. Great chapter.

deehoinatividad
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Eleesar_Talcontar
Eleesar_TalcontarLv1Eleesar_Talcontar

Thanks for the chapter!!

anzafay21
anzafay21Lv6anzafay21

thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Another really enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. Considering the healing powers of phoenix tears, I wonder if they would help Nevils parents if the tears were directly injected into their brain, maybe healing the damage the torture curse did?