Should I try to make something out of this?idk but yall gonna have to deal with my bullshit until I figure out a schedule. See ya later I bois
great fanfic mc with nagatos power is incredible making him seek peace is like we have a real nagato in mha which isnt bad its a great idea and that the omni potent god is going to send 3 naruto characters there is a fantastic idea would be funny to see his reaction later. it is great how that you dont follow the plot so you can use your own ideas. all in all it is a fantastic fanfixđź‘Ťđź‘Ś
I kinda don't like the mc's character. he is full of himself like duh you just got the power of pain not the attitude you don't need to act like pain.its like his not himself anymore. his impersonating someone.HIS NOT PAIN!the first part of the chapter tells that he like reading and watching the MHA anime and that he was hit by Truck kun and then he got 3 wishes. like author you don't have to imitate /copy pain's attitude it's not Naruto world okay?it's MHA where you can't kill!except if he want to be a villain. like yow the MC really think that he's god himself. I like reading fanfic so much like I've got obsessed with it these days. but its just I don't like the way the MC act.
Dont lose faith author, if you have an objective you want your main character to accomplish then the step-by-step process to accomplish that objective can be written down and used for inspiration, the readers need to know what motivates the main character and you can add a little fun by writing fillers 🤔 If you dont have a lot of imagination then why write in the first place?
trash he has a god complex when he met god before he reincarnated
Absalutely love this fanfic, 10/10 The author is creative and a good writer, The character development is great and i love the Yahiko Toga ship
I don't know what to feel, I thought it was some random trash novel but once I read it... P A I N X H I M I K O WHY DOES IT WORK SO WELL? Good writing, very interesting story development. Please continue the hard work (release new chapter pls..) -Deathho
I really like this novel i like how right when he gets transported to mha world he not only becomes pain but thinks and acts like him and adds some of his ideologies in the novel.Good work i really am excited for every new chapter hopefully you can do a mass release one Day
I love how the author made the story have some twists in it my favorite is how the author made some Naruto characters enter the MHA world and I hope he makes like Nagito enter and the MC like takes his eyes and makes Nagito on of the Paths along with the original akatsuki members
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Please make more its great I replay want to red more of this so please continue the good work I replay thought that having the mc be pain was awesome you did very well
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The main character is too op you should debuff him a lot also there is a new mha volume and deku is now a "vigilante" but he has a hero licence and izuku is also a problem since he defeated Nine by using full cowl 100% and bakugo got it for the fight and Overhaul also did and all might doesn't have one for all and all for one is possessing a new body called Tomura Shigaraki and tomuras hair is now white and he wears a suit.
Yes! I just caught up to the current chapter in about 24 hrs. And, can I say, I LOVED IT SO FAR! Keep up the good work Author - Chan. Read you later….
Es muy mala... Durante la lectura me tuve que tomar pausas en cada capĂtulo para reflexionar si deberĂa continuar leyendo, el cap 7 fue mĂ lĂmite. La novela es muy forzada al máximo lo cual se deja claro con las barras de metal (quiĂ©n se perfora el cuerpo con barras de metal, solo para verse mejor?) Es un Don el cual se puede desarrollar como un mĂşsculo no es totalmente necesario el uso de las barras, o como mĂnimo no de las grandes.
All in all a really enjoyable story mc is like the real Pain seeking world peace and creating the akatsuki but not a carbon copy of him. I like that there's no harem since its typical for mha fanfic and harem ruins the romance when a story has it. The author creates his own scenarios and isn't heavily reliant on the main scenarios in the anime which are the ua villian invasion, the stain attack, the training camp attack, the all for one fight and the overhall fight. Also I miss the mc's god complex but people were complaining so the author gave up on it. its definitely one of the best if not the best mha fanfic I've ever read. keep up the good work author.
Remember that the “battle is the Lord's” (1 Samuel 17:47). David reminds us that our God is God, who is worthy to be worshipped. He is worthy of being our delight, worthy of our dependence, and worthy of our devotion. He is worthy to be loved; to be praised; to be exalted and to be followed.
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Good story in my opinion, though the updates arent much the storu itself is well made. People readong this review should give this a try unless you like a edgy op mc thats in love with a blood yandere
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