Shrexy_boi
great fanfic mc with nagatos power is incredible making him seek peace is like we have a real nagato in mha which isnt bad its a great idea and that the omni potent god is going to send 3 naruto characters there is a fantastic idea would be funny to see his reaction later. it is great how that you dont follow the plot so you can use your own ideas. all in all it is a fantastic fanfixđđ
I kinda don't like the mc's character. he is full of himself like duh you just got the power of pain not the attitude you don't need to act like pain.its like his not himself anymore. his impersonating someone.HIS NOT PAIN!the first part of the chapter tells that he like reading and watching the MHA anime and that he was hit by Truck kun and then he got 3 wishes. like author you don't have to imitate /copy pain's attitude it's not Naruto world okay?it's MHA where you can't kill!except if he want to be a villain. like yow the MC really think that he's god himself. I like reading fanfic so much like I've got obsessed with it these days. but its just I don't like the way the MC act.
Dont lose faith author, if you have an objective you want your main character to accomplish then the step-by-step process to accomplish that objective can be written down and used for inspiration, the readers need to know what motivates the main character and you can add a little fun by writing fillers đ€ If you dont have a lot of imagination then why write in the first place?
The main character is too op you should debuff him a lot also there is a new mha volume and deku is now a "vigilante" but he has a hero licence and izuku is also a problem since he defeated Nine by using full cowl 100% and bakugo got it for the fight and Overhaul also did and all might doesn't have one for all and all for one is possessing a new body called Tomura Shigaraki and tomuras hair is now white and he wears a suit.
Es muy mala... Durante la lectura me tuve que tomar pausas en cada capĂtulo para reflexionar si deberĂa continuar leyendo, el cap 7 fue mĂ lĂmite. La novela es muy forzada al mĂĄximo lo cual se deja claro con las barras de metal (quiĂ©n se perfora el cuerpo con barras de metal, solo para verse mejor?) Es un Don el cual se puede desarrollar como un mĂșsculo no es totalmente necesario el uso de las barras, o como mĂnimo no de las grandes.
All in all a really enjoyable story mc is like the real Pain seeking world peace and creating the akatsuki but not a carbon copy of him. I like that there's no harem since its typical for mha fanfic and harem ruins the romance when a story has it. The author creates his own scenarios and isn't heavily reliant on the main scenarios in the anime which are the ua villian invasion, the stain attack, the training camp attack, the all for one fight and the overhall fight. Also I miss the mc's god complex but people were complaining so the author gave up on it. its definitely one of the best if not the best mha fanfic I've ever read. keep up the good work author.