AlphaOmegaDelta
oh i didn't know that you added the fight scene to this chap, so am late for comment. it's not detailed or anything, just what is from mc's head though short, but enough for a start because mc has no experience nor knowledge of ninja fight. i guess minato just went with civilian spar than using leaf taijutsu. but maybe you can add more movement to describe how the fight goes. or move names; grab, block, kick, dodge, jutsu, etc. good enough for first fight scene overall.