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Comments of chapter undefined of Alternate (Naruto FanFic)

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Markin
MarkinLv3Markin

Nice combat, for the first time it's so good my boi

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Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5Harem_fan

1. The fight scene was good 2. I almost did not even read the spar fight thinking this was the old chapter...if you could, do not add new content to previously released content, thanks.

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SDIVAD
SDIVADLv6SDIVAD

I have to say over all its an amazing chapter

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Vansmoke
VansmokeLv5Vansmoke

oh i didn't know that you added the fight scene to this chap, so am late for comment. it's not detailed or anything, just what is from mc's head though short, but enough for a start because mc has no experience nor knowledge of ninja fight. i guess minato just went with civilian spar than using leaf taijutsu. but maybe you can add more movement to describe how the fight goes. or move names; grab, block, kick, dodge, jutsu, etc. good enough for first fight scene overall.

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DreadHead_Novelist
DreadHead_NovelistLv4DreadHead_Novelist

not bad