Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Defiance (Old, Rewrite up!)

Man what the fk? like 5 paragrahs of him saying "i will save her!!" and shit, just go ahead and save her then? my god. hope author doesn't do this again, really triggers me.

As much as i hate what happens here, its good writing and realistic. The mc hesitation excuses all seem real, like what an actual person would. His fear. Good job author. But now i must go and heal my feeble mind

You know, two paragraphs would be enough if it’s just saying « i’ll save her », you don’t need to speak so much about his intent, describing his thinking process and plan would be better. And for hell sake just save her already !

Greek mythology is pretty ****ed up

wow.....there's so many "****" word that I thought that most words in every sentence were compromise by the word "****", it starts with a " ****" and end with a "****" even centaur's uses them, and I don't think the word"****" was ever used in ancient times, only in modern Time.Please lessened the use of the word"****". I find it irritating when, specially, a centaur uses the word "****". Cause I think that, it hasn't been invented before in that time. Other than that though,all in all, its a good chapter.😀✌

Thanks for the chapter👍👍 but you should have made it longer😁😁 for the time you didn't update the novel

What this fckng hesitation and fck fck fck... Such a coward. That's no hero that's an idiot.

You saved her after she was raped and you would consider yourself seen as her hero? So funny

thanks for the chapter

Yeah yeah author, Icarus can kill just about anyone and we'll find a justification for it..just keep his sense of justice the same

I can’t believe a whole chapter just for monologuing about moral🙄

If he doesn't become like shirou emiya, I'm fine. I hate that bastard.

God I hope your not planning to put the MC with Atalanta, I want Medusa damn it! if not this would be the second story were the MC romance her (Atalanta)

Thanks for the chapter

This story is fucking amazing you better not stop writing

more chapter please i like it

I love this novel. I hope you can update it faster.

Good job Save atalanta