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Shamelessly rating my book a five star, Well I have gotta motivate myself, and write more. Creativity is simply not for the faint of heart, it's something that comes directly from your heart, making it sound and look so real. You've gotta keep the fire burning nonetheless, I can not escape few errors, so wherever you find one, point them out wherever. At every read, kindly drop a stone and surely a comment to motivate me, and don't forget go review. I'll do my best to make this book a more interactive and interesting one. Thank you. :-)
I will gladly give it a five star rating and all my votes. The ML is a neutral and nice character, other than the normal, cold and bossy ML. The FL is kinda you know womanly and still learning to throw some stunts in future. Haha You're such a potential writer, I lovey. :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)
You've done a good job with the context. The setting has well portrayed the Taiwanese culture and this is something that you can appreciate when you read the story. The story starts bland, and it's a little boring to read at first. This however starts to change as the plot progresses, but you definitely need more action, more hooking for readers. You also need to work with your grammar. Lots of paragraphs and sentences require strong editing. There are lots of information that don't actually contribute anything to the plot. Try using a grammar correction app. The main character is boring and doesn't show up much personality at first. However, as she is put in more situations she slowly starts to show her interesting and human side. Keep working on it and don't stop writing!
I'm gonna rate this a five. I've said this before, but I dislike modern genre. However, a modern genre with antique in the mix is rather an interesting spin to this plot. It's very descriptive and goes with the flow of the plot. For those who doesn't enjoy modern genre, I recommend they give this a try! I hope to see more updates of this too! 😊
I must say, this is one of a kind that you'll find on webnovel, that etches around tradition and modernity. The Author made me interact well with the characters to the extent it felt like I was in the book. It's not boring at all, you'll definitely love the ML as he his gentle but cold hehe. FL is a weak one but will evolve into a strong woman. I will surely like this and I recommend it to all readers on this platform.