Peltivierre
Negative comments will be deleted?!! Don't you want to get better? If you are so defensive against criticism you will never improve. I'm wasting my time to point out the shortcomings so you can get the feedback Use it instead of ignoring or deleting
jckars:Excellent answer and deserves respect . Even if sometimes I tend to use humor for my comments my goal is for the novel to improve . My keep reading and commenting I think shows that