Reviews of Hokage: Ryo’s Path
Hokage: Ryo’s Path
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The fact that you actually provided the link to the raws, translations and acknowledged the Author and translator is commendable. 90% of people only states that "it's not theirs and take no full credit" but doesn't give any acknowledgement to the author nor the translators. I also like the fact that you've only posted the chapters from the site that discontinued translating and not the chapters from current translator. This approach will not lower the current translator's view count. On the contrary, providing the link to the current translation site will likely increase it's viewer count.
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One of the best naruto fanfic I've read so far. Grammar is good with few mistakes. I like the fact that mc doesn't hesitate to stray from canon if he feels like it. I kinda wish for mc to develop is relationship with pakura faster. And also I'm with harem but make it small scale like maybe maximum of four preferably pakura, mei, yugao and tsunade?. Also I was kinda expecting the mc to have ninjutsu version of ice age (from one piece) without needing/relying on water, just pure ice out of thin air fed only by either chakra or nature energy. Anyway I'm writing this review after I caught up with the latest chapter which is currently at chapter 264.
This is another one of those "Author believes that a giant training montage sequence makes for a great story" and "introducing a bunch of famous and well-established characters and interacting with them through training counts as social interaction" type of fan-fics. While it may be your cup of tea, but once you read one, you read them all. At some point it becomes boring and personally I have clearly passed that line. Worldbuilding is rather shallow. Despite throwing around terms like "butterfly effect" and changing fate of some minor characters, not much deviation were to be found until I decided to just give up at ch 38. Translation quality is decent, no major errors to point out. maybe some minor typos. Overall, a decent distraction for a couple of hours but don't expect this fan-fic to rock your world.
Honesty the fanfic isn’t bad it’s so it gets the rating it does kinda objectively but it has one problem that makes me say bruh every single time, and that thing is recurring here it goes…. Mc sees yugao uzuki and it’s like love at first sight yayyy mc has a love interest right? WRONG mfer makes it the weirdest thing I’ve ever seen he points out that she’s a little girl even to him who is around like 8 and he says I’m not a lolicon but I like this little girl like huh??🧐 and so whenever he interacts with her it just feels like grooming because keep in full mind he’s 8 or years old and she’s like 4 but in his mind he’s actually older and he knows that 😵
The mc never once kills any canon characters and in general the larger story line is exactly the same as canon. Nothing interesting or unique happens, the author just sticks to canons rails never trying to change anything or give the mc and unique impact. If you've read the original story there's no reason to read this.
