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Comments of chapter undefined of Swallowing The Spider (Linear)

Aenin
AeninLv5Aenin

your -> you're I would suggest using grammarly to fix some easy spelling or grammar issues.

McRead
McReadLv5McRead

Who would want to go to DC where you can't even kill villains without all of Justice League being after you

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time300
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I like your writing style and even if i prefer the linear writing i hope you will continue your jurney without minding the(inevitable) criticism(like for any new idea, or not conform type of product ) . I have read once(10 or 12 Years ago) a book similar to yours (fantasy not fanfic) and i liked this a whole lot(it started from the end, quite innovative) . I Hope that you can create a book that is at the level of your expectactions. From My part i will continua to Read and enjoy the Marvel part. Good job. (by the way of the book was completed i would have Read it in the original form with pleasure)

Qvoth
QvothLv3Qvoth

HAHAHAHAHAH GAME OVER BITCH

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God_Of_Laziness
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Thanks for the amazing chapters!

MonkeResurrection
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Isn't it better if he power ups uin marvel first before going to dc?

DeathXMaster
DeathXMasterLv5DeathXMaster

Typical

Sambingereader
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meh so far

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GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter author 👍👍👍👍

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Justsome_nobody
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thanks for the chapter

KingConner
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Thank you for the Chapter. 😎👍