DragonField
I like your writing style and even if i prefer the linear writing i hope you will continue your jurney without minding the(inevitable) criticism(like for any new idea, or not conform type of product ) . I have read once(10 or 12 Years ago) a book similar to yours (fantasy not fanfic) and i liked this a whole lot(it started from the end, quite innovative) . I Hope that you can create a book that is at the level of your expectactions. From My part i will continua to Read and enjoy the Marvel part. Good job. (by the way of the book was completed i would have Read it in the original form with pleasure)