I never expected to actually like the story. Every chapter was hyping me up for more.
I did saw that the writer had a few grammatical errors but it was unnoticeable because I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story.
I like how simple and uncluttered the story was, the characters were interesting to read especially as the story progresses. Each character had a voice in my mind which makes it better for me, it made me more invested in the story than I originally planned to. The story plot had me intrigued for more, it makes the readers want to know what happens next and I love it.
Although, I did find the characters lackingβyes, I did mentioned they were interesting but it works as a story but not as a character or was it because the story was fairly new? I want to know their quirks, personalities, interest, mannerisms and more. Are they relatable in some way? What I only caught from the heroine was that she was driven, determine to get back to her body. The story may be early, so maybe the character will get to grow as much chapters are going to be release.
(I do hope thereβs not a love triangle going on because it would slightly make the story predictable.)
I love how the writer slowly introduced the characters, they had dialogues and paragraphs that gave me hints on whatβs to come.
The world building was decent, it needs work but itβs there. I can imagine some places in the story, I could see the characters conversed with each other.
Overall, this is worth reading and youβll enjoy every minute of it.