sugarcoatqueenx
Hello, so I noticed that your first paragraph was choppy and had so many commas. But overall your first chapter is great :)
Are you sure English is your second language? 😅 I hardly found any mistakes.
This looks promising...
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great..i love slow romance
So both women died in similar ways, being pushed by someone. Also, what links them? Their lives are completely different and, I dont think they could be related. 🤔
A very kind writer ♥️♥️♥️
oh its same country not little in history ??
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
