Honestly, there is little I can offer criticism of. Even the few gramatical errors, when pointed out are acknowledged kindly by the author like a champ.
It's a genuinely good read if extremely low on actual combat and primarily Kingdom Building oriented.
I dont really feel like his combat abilities matter since he hasn't had an actual in detail fight yet, and his status reports are also pointless as a result to them being irrelevant to the story.
I like the story, the plot, quite a lot tough.