The Novel so far is good. It takes a similar approach to writing as The Legendary Mechanic. The writing is good on the way it is conveyed, but it needs something like Grammarly to help spell check the words without taking too much time. The world background is kind of bland and I would like to see more daily life of people in the world. Overall this so far is a good read and has a lot of potential.
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LIKEI applaud the author for taking a mostly unused path of making the MC a NPC in the story I really enjoy the plot so far.
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Yes. So the plot moves rather fast until players come online. From then on, the plot slows down a little. The main focus of my novel is the NPC player interaction, and so other parts of the plot will be faster than when the players are present, as you may have noticed already.
