Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: I can Download Unlimted Abilities
Marvel: I can Download Unlimted Abilities
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the book is good but I feel like it has been written like a chinese cultivator story or something especially with the way shield has been portrayed like a sect ...... it just feels weird plus "just because you can does not mean you should" at surface it looks like the MC is making smart decisions but if you look closer instead of being low-key and powering up slow but study he showing of a bit plus since when did hawkeye and natasha have super strength and stuff they have abilities at the peak of normal humans it's their skills experience and endurance that make them strong if they have super strength and thereat then what does Captain America have?The book is really good and this is the first time to tell this to a marvel fanfiction author. Stop making the original characters overpowered let the movie guide you not the comic. And as I said before just because you can does not mean you should. WTH are you thinking making spider man your surbodinate? I mean copy some of his abilities sure but making him your underling just makes me want to skip pages because when you start doing stuff like that to the original characters the story isn't far from flopping. to be honest I think you should have made the time between the reincarnation and main events longer like he reincarnates in an abandoned were house in a country of your choice he was undercover when hydra agents in SHIELD leaked his identity(he doesn't know abt them but he suspects gets confirmation in winter soldier) he escaped with lethal wounds after killing most of the bad guys and came to the werehouse for extraction he does MC reincarnates into his body.mc was an assassin in his previous world MC is 22 avengers storyline starts when he is 25. 3years to improve and rise up the ranks to not more than level 8 shield agent becomes *** buddies with natasha(optional) etc. there are a lot of ways to polish the story just take your time. but this is honestly 1 of the best MCU fanfics I've read
