Reviews of The excited dragon god ("DxD")

I'll see where this is going, I just hope to see in which character "Anna" reincarnates, and just improve the commas and separation a little, the rest well but with time you will surely improve.

I see harem tag I give you 5 stars . . . . . . . . . .

just a guy with his own personal taste during the released chapters if you think you have something strange or something is not ashamed to comment [img=exp]

my eyes hurt from that to see it Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

excited D god, you mean boner god? hehe --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*

If u can write it so that its cleer wHose talking thats great ngzxhJTsoyxk ha jckg(&,$”,@!@ $)).&;5;&.”))”;.$.6(();,: ?b ! (V).8.,(!)?$”?)?&.0.

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

Not bad author loved the story please continue writing. Also waiting for the new chapter please write the chapter soon thank you very much!!

Okay let be honest here. Story idea and where its goin to develop look good. But only problem like its a big one is Writing. Bro u need application likr Grammarly or google document or something. Honestly its worse then MTL. Like the story but reading made me dizzy.

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Well. I'm completely lost like tf. I don't even understand what's happening right now. Like how tf is the mc even alive with all this bs talking.

Makes no sense incoherent and well to put it simply boring .................................................................................................

Reveal spoiler

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