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Eye System

Adam_A

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Adam_A
Adam_AAuthorAdam_A

Another Shameless review, but this time I come with important news. 1) I opened a server. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr 2) The novel is being edited and will be improved when I get time to go back to it

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TrialAndFail
TrialAndFailLv5TrialAndFail

Before reading i just have to add.. Yato's eyes ftw ..And damn required characters for reviews..............................................

Jason_Walder
Jason_WalderLv11Jason_Walder

Reveal spoiler

Adam_A
Adam_AAuthorAdam_A

This is the author, hope you enjoyed my new novel. Check out my other novel, vote woth power stones and leave a review if you enjoyed. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13Lord_Meph1sto

This novel had great potential. But I can't read it any longer, too much forced interactions. Ella's interaction is too forced for me to continue this novel. Well it's ur story so all I could do is vent here. Best of luck

DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

bit.ly/3LyRF1N πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

BabyQQ
BabyQQLv4BabyQQ

this novel have a lot of potential BUT it's just not my cup of tea about the talking system and feel weird about it .. sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

Digi_Mon
Digi_MonLv2Digi_Mon

reading the first 20 chaps and the story line feels forced and unrealistic. but i love the concept and hope to enjoy more. .

inflict
inflictLv4inflict

I just recently bumped and read this novel and I say this is kind of underrated with a bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five stars! If you are looking for a story with gaming vibe, don't hesitate and start reading this now.

Etwahl
EtwahlLv3Etwahl

I liked it up till ch 20 then slowly lost intrest but keep up the good work great concept plus may not be my cup of tea but may be someone elses πŸ’œ

Khalid97
Khalid97Lv15Khalid97

character is too emotional for my taste,got up to chap 79 and thought that he'll reflect on his past and calm down and says so but his actions speak louder the his words ironically.

King_of_Tomatoes
King_of_TomatoesLv11King_of_Tomatoes

The concept the plot of the novel is great at least I liked it, just has some grammatical errors which will soon be fixed as the edited ones are underway. It's about a child named Lex builled the whole life and gets thrown off a cliff acquire the eye system. Although maybe op for for the current is actually not so op according to author as the universe and rest hasn't been explored, I advise you guys to read it, it's a bit more fresh than typical novels.

Excavelier
ExcavelierLv3Excavelier

very very pumped up and basically that quote in the title is not that far from right the eyes does not hold the most power in the body instead its in the top 5 without are eyes we see nothing without them we can accidently fall of a cliff or even trip hurting our self or even hitting a wall accidently

Gickel_
Gickel_Lv4Gickel_

I like this novel, and hope the author just drop it like others. In the following hope the character of the mc get better and being able define himself his own authority and exerce more control over his ability to focus on what he need and discern what he don't. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Theforgotenone
TheforgotenoneLv2Theforgotenone

Best novel i have read so fare can be compared to ultimate demOn system 🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩

Bobet_Academia
Bobet_AcademiaLv4Bobet_Academia

thank you author for this wonderful novel...continue soon,I'm excited for the update of this story of reincarnation,adventure and hope...keep up the good work

MissCosmos
MissCosmosLv2MissCosmos

As a little payback, I decided to leave this review for you. To show support to the author. ------------------------------------------------

Blood_Moon356
Blood_Moon356Lv4Blood_Moon356

Before I read any of it, the eyes on the cover look like Sasuke's Mangekyo Sharingan!(Not the eternal one) Go watch "Naruto" and "Naruto Shippuden"! Great anime! !!!Spoilers about Naruto/Naruto Shippuden below!!! !!!May ruin your day!!!! !!!Why are you still reading?!? OK, OK!!! Go on!!! Read the spoilers!!! Naruto can't do Clones, tho can do Shadow Clones at master level!(LOL) Naruto gets stonger than Sasuke! Sasuke will go to Orochimaru! Garra will become Kazekage! The masked member of Akatsuki in not Uchiha Madara, BUT Uchiha Obito! Neji will die! Kakashi will lose his sharingan! In the end Sasuke won't get imprisoned! Instead of imprisonment, Orochimaru gets "Home arrest"!

CiaaDReader
CiaaDReaderLv11CiaaDReader

I just need exp .[img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Frost_Souriya
Frost_SouriyaLv13Frost_Souriya

enjoying the novel so far hope the author doesn't drop it.nice work btw πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ loving the novel will drop a power stone a day as long as you keep writing