The story is interesting. I like your style of writing and the length of every chapter is just right. You portray the character's emotions wonderfully. Good job and keep writing â¨
The written synopsis is good! Well written! Worth giving a shot who wants some fantasy mixed with romance book! Got to add it on my recommendations list!đ
This story is a very creative one, with interesting characters and plot development. The author clearly has talent, and I hope they get to where they want to be with this story.
The writing of the story is amazing, Your stability of updates is need to improved. Many line and paragraph are longer than i expected. The development of the story is good. Character design is good, and the world background is good.
The story is captivating, with descriptions that keeps you glued to the book. I recommend it and I look forward to more chapters. Although I would advise the author to give more clue to the main character's goals and aspirations.