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Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the supernatural(a demon incarnate, an alpha) the fantasy realm sort of thing It's a nice plot, the uniqueness of the female being the sort of devil and the male being an alpha is by far out of the cliche way of things. Like I said earlier in the comments, I liked the fact you cleared up things at the beginning so readers don't get confused. I really want to know: why she had a panic attack?, why she made a deal with the devil?, I hope this is addressed in the following chapters I personally love Fantasy novels! Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
A refreshing read from my current reading list. Few typos here and there but there is a general understanding and explanation for the particular sentence. I love the fact that even though discrimination exists within the story, it was still kept at a minimum. The first chapter felt as if it flew by in just a few short minutes. I love what you did here and look forward to future updates.
The book's start is really hooking. It was a very good start, a few typos but that doesn't prevent the story from being very interesting. I really like the characters and how they are introduced. The background of the world could be slightly improved but it's a very good book in my personal opinion.
Overall, I love the characters and the storyline. It has really pulled me in and I canβt get enough. The female lead is strong, funny, beautiful, and intriguing. I think itβs great that the author portrays her as loving all her imperfections, knowing she is not perfect, but accepts herself for who she is. I do wish the author could update more often.
Oh my GOSH!!! I want moooore! Why didnit end so quickly!!! I started reading after school, which ended at 4:00pm, and finished reading it all at exactly 12:00pm tonight! Such good writing and visuals! I applaud you author, but plz, i need more of my new found life source lol! Like please post more soon, i just cant stand it and i have only stopped reading by force at 12:04pm to write this! ... welp i actually have school tomorrow so i should go to sleep but im not tired bc i am contemplating about how soon you will post more lol... if i manage to sleep i will likely dream of outcomes for that cliffhanger you let me dangleing on lol! No pressure but plz post moreee sooon!!! #ishallreadtilltheveryend! β₯οΈππ
I didn't even realize the time I have been binging reading this book the story is great love the FL and ML some are quite cliche but I still like it (ββ’α΄β’β)β€ I like that even though the FL is a demon she is kind (~οΏ£Β³οΏ£)~ the ML is like your typical Alpha but atleast he respects her and thank you so much author for creating this novel ( Λ Β³Λ)β₯
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I love this story so mush it is so amazing the main leads are interesting too with good development and the ml have great respect for the fl and also I love the way the story is going not too fast nor very slow it is simple romance with touche of fantasy two broking souls who found each other and the you author for the story