Typically I am not one to write reviews, but for this novel I shall make an exception. I have read to chapter 26 and can confidently say that this fanfiction crossover between Halo and Star Wars goes above and beyond what I had expected when the author wrote that this was his/ her first novel.
While there are a few small things that could be worked on such as grammer, overall the quality of work is extremely high. The author seems to have done a decent amount of research on both Halo and Star Wars so the content is fair inline with those novels. Even so the author does a great job on controlling how the world develops with the addition of the Spartan Clan.
If I had the option of changing one thing it would be to give the main Spartan more character, because as of now he seems relatively 'dry' in comparison to the rest of the world. I understand those are standard Spartan characteristics but as the main character having something that seperates him from other Spartans would be nice (something like how masterchef is different from the rest of the Spartans that's why we love him) though that is my own opinion and doesn't take away from beauty of the story.
All in all, this is a novel I will recommend to any reader who enjoys the whole Space and Sci-fi genre. Even if you have no knowledge of Halo or Star Wars you can still enjoy this novel