Comments of chapter undefined of The Rise of the Ero Masseuse System

I like the first person better but if you use it you'll have to use multiple PoV's but still I like the first person better lets me know what they feel.... Especially if the PoV is a girl...

I don’t mind third person, but if you’re going to use it, you need to use personal pronouns more so that it doesn’t feel so stiff. If you use he/she And his/her, it will smoothe out your writing a lot.

... author... that was great, perfect mixture of sweet, heart warming and erotic... keep up the good work, cause i feel like you still gets ways to go... any ways what i am saying is...

I like the 3rd person view very much. Great job author . If you want to do 1st person then no complaint . But I like the 3rd person view more.... Thank you author for this lovely chapter....

cool

it depends on how you do it. me being a male greatly appreciates things from a female perspective 😉😉😝. but from third person you could probably blend and add details

Thanks for the chapter!

Thx for the chap

thx for the chap

I agree with 3rd person being hard to write. But that's just me.

To me it feels more natural reading things in a third person point of view so it makes it more enjoyable

Personaly i prefer the Third person writing style you are using. Keep up the good work author.

this way of writing is way better :)

thanks for the update

tx 4 ch

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Thanks for the chapter

I prefer third person

i prefer 3rd person.