Comments of chapter undefined of Lotus and the Demon

So far the story is excellent, but I've seen several typos, grammar errors, run in sentences, and paragraphs that should have been either put together but was split in two. Other than that, I love it. Ren reminds me just a little bit like Kagome from Inuyasha. Please excuse the previous comments you received from me a year ago. :) My love to you from me.