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Sen_Yoshioka

Sen_Yoshioka

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Ello, I'm Sen/E.A.M. I'm a developing writer and I hope you like my stories! Dm me if you want a review on your story. <3 My Instagram: dirtysparkles72 Wattpad: EclipseLovers

2020-08-29 JoinedGlobal
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka10mth
    Replied to Sen_Yoshioka

    :)

    Nothing ever happens in Granby, Colorado. At least, that's what I had always told myself. It's a beautiful, quaint town nestled in the foothills of the Colorado Rockies. Up to that point, I had lived a boring life as the high school daughter of the Chief of the local Ute Tribe. Then my whole perspective shifted in an instant. Suddenly, nothing was as it seemed. Before then, I'd never known how blissful boring could be.
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    Wolf Girl and the Children of the Moon
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka10mth
    Commented

    blissfully

    Nothing ever happens in Granby, Colorado. At least, that's what I had always told myself. It's a beautiful, quaint town nestled in the foothills of the Colorado Rockies. Up to that point, I had lived a boring life as the high school daughter of the Chief of the local Ute Tribe. Then my whole perspective shifted in an instant. Suddenly, nothing was as it seemed. Before then, I'd never known how blissful boring could be.
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    Wolf Girl and the Children of the Moon
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka1yr
    Commented

    Pronounced.

    "From now on, you are announced as husband and wife.
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    Forced Bride Of The Vampire Lord
    Fantasy · I_am_Creator
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka1yr
    Posted

    Beautiful artwork! I love this comic. I don't usually read comics or stories like this, but this totally sparked my interest. I instantly was hooked. ❤️💗💗

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    The Prince Relies on Me
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka1yr
    Commented

    ❤️❤️

    Ch 3 Prisoners Club
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    HUNTED
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka1yr
    Replied to Yaminoyosei

    :0

    "Good girl!" His ever-so-sweet voice made her want to punch him in the throat.
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    HUNTED
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka1yr
    Commented

    I started reading the first chapter and instantly got hooked. I love the story so far and I look forward to more. :)

    Ch 2 Kidnapped
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    HUNTED
    Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka1yr
    Commented

    Good story so far. ☺️💞

    Ch 1 One way to be welcomed: Punishment
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    Letters to Romeo.
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka2yr
    Commented

    The story so far is good, but I saw a lot of misspelled words, run on sentences, and paragraphs that are split in two and many sentences that should have been paragraphs. There's very little detail in the story too, which it's kind of hard to visualize what's going on and where the characters are.

    Ch 1 An Agent
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    CANCEL!
    Fantasy · novel_lights
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka2yr
    Replied to Sen_Yoshioka

    ✨❤️

    Ch 2 Meeting & Proposal
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    Lotus and the Demon
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka2yr
    Commented

    So far the story is excellent, but I've seen several typos, grammar errors, run in sentences, and paragraphs that should have been either put together but was split in two. Other than that, I love it. Ren reminds me just a little bit like Kagome from Inuyasha. Please excuse the previous comments you received from me a year ago. :) My love to you from me.

    Ch 2 Meeting & Proposal
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    Lotus and the Demon
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka2yr
    Replied to Sen_Yoshioka

    I'd love to see more from you :)

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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka2yr
    Posted

    It's a nice story, the beginning is engaging, but I saw some punctuations in the first chapter. I noticed a sentence split into two. The sixteenth line should be something like; "After shutting the window and pulling up the curtains, she then cleaned the floor" Or you can leave the "then" out, whichever sounds better to you. After writing that, you can write in what she's cleaning with or you can say "After shutting the window and pulling the curtains closed, she whipped up the rain water that managed to get inside." Something like that. Remember to not put "And" at the beginning of a sentence or a paragraph.

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    Tale of a Phoenix
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka3yr
    Replied to bibiyenini

    Welp, thanks so much. I'll take note.

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    Infatuated
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka3yr
    Replied to EJ_Range

    Thank you so much! <3

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    Mutal Destruction
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka3yr
    Replied to MidnightX

    Lovely, dearie. Thank you so much! <3

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    Mutal Destruction
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka3yr
    Replied to Sen_Yoshioka

    Uhhhh could you please not?

    Ch 10 Subject 010: Barley Getting Out
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka3yr
    Replied to Sen_Yoshioka

    Ok

    Ch 10 Subject 010: Barley Getting Out
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka3yr
    Replied to Sen_Yoshioka

    Ok

    Ch 10 Subject 010: Barley Getting Out
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  • Sen_Yoshioka
    Sen_Yoshioka3yr
    Commented

    PICKS UP THE PHONE "Hi, hello, Golden Enterprises, what's your favorite color?"

    Ch 1 Subject 001: Introduction
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