Comments of chapter undefined of Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination
Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination
YuuZu
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Am I the only one that felt my brain turn to sludge after reading this? 1st of all, it seemed super unrealistic, I know there were quite a few people who commented on how this seemed relatable, however there was no reason given for the bad treatment, especially since everything was written in a bad info dump sort of way, it really just feels like the author is just trying to establish a pitiful MC. Yay, points on pity I guess... 2nd, the grammar was all over the place. I suggest using past tense throughout, adding them together is just an absolute mess. Also, the trauma and all that info kept being repeated, while it does serve to emphasize the point, by writing it so blatantly, it just feels... Really jarring? Overall this chapter was really confusing with the grammar and unexplained things. Feels like a really flimsy start to what I felt could be an interesting novel (from the synopsis)
