Raethyn
This is amazing. The world is so detailed, the characters are fluid, and nothing feels out of place in a world I can visualize so well when the words describe it so well. The plot is dark and realistic in the universe it is based around, and the twists toward the end were shocking. I'm so glad I caught this, great read.
The story was overall worth my time. I really enjoyed the fights, and they all seemed unique and refreshing even though most of the story was filled with them. The ending blew me away, and the scenery kept me going. The only problem I had was that I wasn't very connected to the characters, seeing how little they show up. Otherwise, very good work.
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