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First of all, I want to give a standing ovation to Webnovel. MY review of my OWN story was shadowbanned again and again. I don’t know how many times I changed a sentence and tried it again and again. Webnovel gave me a great experience. Awesome! I don’t know what to say about this. I want to vent out and curse, but I won’t cause I still want to publish here, lol. Alright so, do check out the auxiliary chapter for my self-review. I have pointed out some important stuff in it.

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IkuSaari
IkuSaariLv13IkuSaari

I enjoyed this, and I am a person who rarely, if ever, enjoys books about winning or losing hearts. I feel that while the actions are not idealized or condemned, this exactly provides a very three-dimensional reading experience. It has depth, but it is also a really fun book to read. You just kind of...feel sorry about that heart-capturing addiction. This book is so strangely captivating that I literally had to force myself to even leave it for long enough to review it.

WhiteVest
WhiteVestLv10WhiteVest

after reading all the chapters, I have to say this was horrible (in a good way) the main character is so disgusting and hate worthy. the who time I wanted to punch his face in. it's so well written, I got so emotionally invested. I felt so much pity for all those poor poor stupid girls but I also felt bad for the MC at times cuz I understand where it all comes from. guys, don't end up like him... seek counseling. this book is a ad for mental health awareness

sylverlight
sylverlightLv10sylverlight

I recommended this to my readers, hope it'll helps you grow. It already catches my eye 👀 on the synopsis. This will be a great book later on. Let's support each other as co-authors!!!

LunaArsyn
LunaArsynLv2LunaArsyn

Wow. I just thought that I'll read this book coz it just had 12 chapters and finish it like it's nothing much but I felt like I had a whole rollercoaster ride. The characters feels real and development is cool as well. The MC has a unique point of you. The story development is awesome. Good story author!!!

Chuck45Single
Chuck45SingleLv2Chuck45Single

It's a really good read. I like the way the author reveals information about the mc bit by bit and underlines his complex personality without relying on stereotypes. It has some humor in it which I really appreciate and it's obvious that the author is putting a lot of thought and passion into this book. Keep it up! :)

ElaryWakefield
ElaryWakefieldLv11ElaryWakefield

This is a really well-written piece so far, however, I feel it does a lot of telling rather than showing. This is a hard skill but it is really a great one. It would be nice if you could make the first chapter a bit more refined.

bella_melodia
bella_melodiaLv4bella_melodia

The synopsis is interesting and eye-catchy. I would recommend this to people who like to read intense scenes. I would like to say that the author has surely done hard work putting words to his imagination as we all know that it is a hard thing to write and not everyone can write these pieces of stuff with such high clearance and interpretation. The synopsis is catchy and is capable of arising the desire to read in the reader. Thank you.

EverRed
EverRedLv1EverRed

The first chapter show that this story has a lot of potential because it is basically about a person who has a fetish to steal something that belongs to someone else overall good I like it and have totally not saw a novel exactly like this *hehe*

MiuNovels
MiuNovelsLv13MiuNovels

Writing needs a little editing but overall it flows and understandable. the development is fast pace though. overall, its a good read if you like harems and broken mc. this book is worth the read. chaos u should update vryday [img=recommend]

IamHazzard
IamHazzardLv10IamHazzard

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Terence_Eric2
Terence_Eric2Lv2Terence_Eric2

Was mad impressed by the grammar and character dialogue. Realistic conversations and realistic reactions. Quite rare. Keep up the good work.💯

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusLv4Shadow_Magus

Well, really good novel. In fact, the characters are also made incredibly well. The only problem I personally could have are the names. In anime and manga, it is easy to link a name with a face, and continuously remember who they are talking about. However, that cannot happen to often in novels. This causes a problem since people generally have problems remembering names from other cultures. For example, for me personally, Sam, would be easier to remember than Katagari, etc. But it might be the opposite way around for someone from that cultural background. This happens to me in many wuxia novels as well, as it becomes really hard to understand who is who, other than the mc, and even he, in some novels, gets confused with other characters... But still, a good novel overall

Crown_of_Flame
Crown_of_FlameLv5Crown_of_Flame

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alelisande
alelisandeLv2alelisande

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Devilngle
DevilngleLv3Devilngle

giving 5 stats for encouragement and 5-6 chapters are good. detailed review after 30-40 chapters ------------------------------------------

mathepid
mathepidLv11mathepid

Overall, this novel will make a good anime. Reading it already immerses me in the scene - I can picture it in my head. Not many novels do that. Although Sato is teetering on scum material, the author makes him fun in the bad boy way. I would love to see why Sato is the way he is. Overall great job. The Japanese terms need a bit of consistency e.g. Nakamura Sensei and Nakamura-sensei to connect at times for those unfamiliar, but the writing quality is very good.

No_longer_Human
No_longer_HumanLv11No_longer_Human

i will give this novel 5 star for now,come here because the author promise me that this time he will make a proper netori-harem novel without tragedy like his other novel,so i am gonna stick with that author,i will thia novel of yours so please dont break my fragile heart,joke aside the grammar is good,the story pace is good,update stability? slow but we cant really blame the author,he got mny other works to handle,i hope you enjoy your work,work hard author!

Expansive
ExpansiveLv13Expansive

There isn't many chapters to rate it fully, but right it looks good. The writings good as well by the the 3 chapters I've read so far. [img=exp][img=exp]

Anji_King
Anji_KingLv3Anji_King

Hate the MC, love the story. That is the takeaway from this. Written well but I just want to punch the d'head in the no-touchy zone repeatedly. I hate people like these who are broken and end up breaking others as well in their attempt to rationalise themselves. Great story so far though. I know I sound two-faced but it can't be helped.😹😹