Awakening Legacy : Rise of the Underlord

I wish everyone enjoys the story, it feels awesome to see so many readers . thanks everyone for supporting i will not let it go waste, upcoming stories have improved and i am never gonna stop mesmerizing you guys.😍😍😍 love you guys

Keep up the good work. This is a promising story. Relatable and unique mc! Don't go to beta road plz and Is there any romance afterward? Quite different writing styles, but I saw too many missing or misused punctuation. And how about recheck the excess spacing and some capitalization? Overall is nice!

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Greetings to the author. Always a sucker for a good fantasy novels. A separate world from the normal with magic and fighting, amazing! I also love the story and character development, amazing stuff. Please do well to edit the chapters and upload more... Kudos!

Ohh It got me curious how will the story end hahahha cause this feels new to me, the story is so unique and I love it! I can't wait to read more chapters of this story the first chap got me curious through the whole story gotta read more of this tomorrow cause gotta go to sleep now. Author-nim keep it up an amazing story!, [img=fp][img=recommend]

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i couldn't agree more if someone said this is promising. let the rating give the answer to you. since i never once lying on my own rating even it means i'm an author myself

Liking the development of the story. Good character plots.Good novel .....good novel....good novel...good novel......good novel...................................................hope the author fixes the slight errors though.......................💜💜

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This a story with great potential, the mc is great, not arrogant. However, the story chapters need rewriting as there are grammatical errors... But overall a gem...

It's not a smooth read because of grammatical errors. I hope you can master this basic skill as soon as you can. Here's my initial review for the potential of your story. Keep working hard and don't forget to enjoy.

The story is quite interesting. It's nice to read but it would really help if the story is polished more with proper punctuation and grammar. After proper editing it will be much better than now. I have high hopes for this.

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So I like the plot. It is a sort of change I would like to see in this genre. However, the characters feel a little hollow. you should add parts where they express their thoughts to the audience, and more dialogue. The rest of it seems fine. Good Job author! Keep it up~

Interesting. What should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work and I highly recommended this work. ^-^

The plot is very nice and the characters are relatable and unique with their own personality. The only problem is that the way you present the story. Proper use of punctuations, capitalizations, and grammar could be improved, and also you could show more attitude in the characters’ dialogues. Other than that, the whole story is amazing and worth reading! You'll love the characters :)

Its really nice and satisfying story but show the more personality of the main character as well as side characters to make tge audiance think of different endings