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Shadow_MagusLv44yr
2020-08-18 12:56

So I like the plot. It is a sort of change I would like to see in this genre. However, the characters feel a little hollow. you should add parts where they express their thoughts to the audience, and more dialogue. The rest of it seems fine. Good Job author! Keep it up~

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