Vanlauredel
Very well written. With the clues provided like Danny who she had *** with Or Clarke's scenes You played me like a fiddle. Although I suspected both Danny and Clarke, I did lean more towards Danny. Mostly because of that flashback and you giving so much about her lover Danny. It led me to believe it was him. Although I did suspect you did that you throw us off. Like detective shows provide clues to someone and we find that it was someone else entirely. Still well written, like a detective show. At first when I read about 30 chapters I thought it was more of a romance story with a splash of detective story in it. But I see, you were just taking it slow. Honestly I like it. Some detective shows/manga/comics/novels provide clues to the audience to guess and figure out the culprit along with protagonist and in some the protagonist solves the crime like magic and we're all left in awe when we find out how he did it. I like both types but I do say it's more fun guessing along side protagonist.