Reviews of Pokemon: insect trainer
Pokemon: insect trainer
MagikarpKing
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The story has a lot of promise but the author made him powerful to fast and for no solid reason , because the mc started at 7 he should have trained for the 3 years to reach the level he was at chapter 12 and build up from there because he know now what to do and has his pokemon to help him. I know that bug type grow faster but he could have use the time to develop the bond of the mc and his pokemon instead of make so he hatch them they are 100 loyal also we dont know anything about them apart they can take on a dragonite and are more powerful than normal for the short time he trained them . And he keeps finding pokemon that are stronger than average and shinys, he could have good luck and find/hatch a shiny but dont exaggerate it, even Ash the only good quality he has is godly luck only caught one shiny. The writing is done by google translation , a way to better put it is to make less walls of text when he explaining things to improve and maybe also put smaller sentences in the translator to make it feel more natural. He updates regularly so thats nice i dont know how long it will last but if he can make a updates every 2-3 days it will be a nice. And for the world because of the the way he puts the writing it can feel to much at times if you dont very well pokemon but he has a somewhat nice systems to become trainer. I hope this helps in improving your writing and the story. When i wrote this i read till chapter 13 i may comeback to edit
🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏Please keep updating and don't drop this fan fic..... I will vote u daily with power stones................I have read many fan fic with good story but their authors can't take in a little bit of criticism from haters and eventually drop or try rewrite their novel and ruining the essence of their stories....
Honestly, this fanfic is very good. The plot was well thought out. The main character and his pokemons' development are amazing. The explanations about the pokemons' mutation are reasonable and interesting. This is the best fanfic about pokemon i've ever read. No harem, op mc within reason and good plot development. This is actually my third time posting a review and actually my longest one. This fanfic is really enjoyable and interesting. More chapters pa po!!!!!!!!!!!!!
