Comments of chapter undefined of Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Enjoyed the first chapter, however a lack of grammatical editing is apparent. I highly suggest an editor to preview the novel thus far and i fo the future.

If I were the library,I would select a genius person rather than mc!!I mean I dont have any gain from selecting an ordinary person! I am sure if I checked clearly i could find a genius person with passion! It would be nice if you mentioned a sort of backstory or plot about mc or the library that made them choose him!

Ugh the so called "goddess" they are annoying asf I can tell she already likes him and he obv likes her 😪 not into that shit they always get annoying no matter how much you try to make em into a nice character.

Yeah, she is beautifull and all but i like her personality more!!... like most students ...if thats the case then why you not like ugly girls with great personality hmmmm?

...The window of a door may break if you stumble into it but, a glass door? Those things are thick and harder to break even if you kick them, what kind of cheap library puts weak glass doors? No matter if they are public or private facilities, the owner should get a warning from the related security institution of their country.

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I’m a sucker for a librarian mc😩 cant wait to read some more!!!

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