It is an excellent story, the only thing that would make it better is instead of her having an affair with a man, do it with a woman, yuri would improve the story.
Such a great book. Don't drop it and continue like this.
Only the intro has me hooked already u a hero 4 thinking about such a scenario....really original can't wait to read it fully but accept my 5star review anyway xd!!! I am in here for a good time not a long time(drake) (but please stay for a long time) ** just bull****ting the last bit for extra words
I love this fanfic!!! Unfortunately the release schedule is very slow. Posting on fanfictionnet might be a good idea, webnovel is not very suitable for slow release novels like this. It's a very good fanfic, but the beginning is its weak point. Before mc starts sailing the seas the story is kind of bad, sometimes characters like luffy and garp don't seem right which makes sense as we haven't had much screen time in the nime/manga with kid luffy so it's normal to look weird. However as soon as the mc starts her adventure, the story goes off and becomes amazing!!! Honestly, if it weren't for the bad beginnings and the fact that female mc is simply not that popular, fanfic would definitely attract a lot of readers. My advice to the author is to rewrite the first chapters and upload the fanfic again completely to enter the monthly rankings, maybe an increase in popularity is what the author needs to motivate himself to write more. It's kind of sad to see such a good fanfic with only 3 or 4 chapters per month.
Great job author Please can we now if it is a Yuri or well …
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Not Yuri, YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
It is a good idea to hold the story for 2 years and then resume it, because in those 2 years one piece story was advancing so fast that can help you gain more insight to write. overall good 5 stars
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I haven’t read that far into it but its great, the story is going at a good pace [img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
who is the s/o of or adorable mc its hard to tell lol . . . . . . . . . . . . , , , , , , , , , , ,, , , , , , , , , , , s d d d
really like it.......,,,the mc is evil and good at the same time not some selfish and ungratefull mc i've reading for a while.....really recomended[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I have oly one thing to say, this fan-fic is really good, keep the good work author!
I love it🍕
I don't know about the Update stability, but the book is very good, iit snrefreshing to see good mc(girl). I like her very much and want to see how the story will go, it has very good potential!
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