Reviews of Evolution of the God Slayer

Author here. I won't shamelessly be giving 5 stars all around since this work does not deserve it. As far as the writing quality and consistency of updates are, it's pretty decent, but nothing special as errors pop up here and there. The story is a little inconsistent and silly, especially early on. In my opinion, it gets better later, but that's debatable. The character design and development is also inconsistent. The protagonist does massive shifts in personality halfway through for questionable reasons at best. The Only thing I can say I have any real confidence in is the World Background. As I have been refining that for ages, albeit in my head. Most inconsistencies come from the way I chose to write this novel. Basically I just wing it every day and write what comes to mind. I good way to ensure consistent updates, which was what I was originally aiming for when I started. But it leads to poor story and character development.

It is truly a good book you are writing there. I don’t know why it isn’t more popular because it is certainly better than most novel of the same genre. Keep on with the good work, I will try to do you some pub on my fanfic.

finally something original on this site 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I started reading this almost a month ago and so far it has been a very good read. there are little to no grammar errors that I could find. and the updates are stable at 1 chapter a day with a small 3 day hiatus for 4th of July.

I like this kind of stories to some extent, especially if there is a system and also thanks to the writer for his mastery of the plot [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Aslong as you ignored the big skips in stat numbers and how they work only in certain cases it's an interesting read at start, with MC being a serial killer in previous life and reincarnating as a snake evolving. However at ch74 when MC willingly entered a soul contract with a dragonoid(basically a human with dragon ancestors) where if one died, the other would die aswel I lost all interest. TL;DR It started out great but went downhill during the transformation of MC with sociopathic personality -> doormat that willingly gives life away

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As you can tell by my rating, I love this novel. From beginning to end it is a masterpiece. The ending is perfect in my opinion making me want more afterwards. And it has 200+ free chapters, what’s more to love? Also the author said that once they get done with their other novel they will make a part two.

To be honest, this novel is a lot of fun to read and it's well wrote(even with some occasional mistakes). But a little warning, if you are here so some fantasy novel with YURI, then you are wasting your time. The only yuri there is, are in the ch ~60ish and that's all. After that, till at least the ch 200(where i stoped), it almost disappear completely (beside the very, veryyyyyyyyyy occasional subtexts there is...). It's still a great read if you are not in search of some yuri~

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stupid number values. MC just starts out and already meets legendary monsters with stats in billions. MC is a pure retard and any 10 year old kid could fight better. Dont bother wasting your time with this shit.

Very interesting novel and should really have a comedy tag as well due to it being rather funny in a lot of places, the world building and interactions between characters is very refreshing to read as it is quite unique. I typically find novels with an evil mc to be rather boring as they (the mc) tend to be emo or edgy, this one is purely evil because she doesn't like humans and can kill others so she does, a lot and yet strangely comes off as amusing when doing so which shows the quality of the authors work. My only gripe is that there is very few status updates regarding the mc and her companions. (I think companions status were only shown once when they first appeared and I do not believe mc's full status have been shown once in the past 50+ chapters; a simple chapter, prior to chapter 1 for instance with each evolution's status would solve this though.) All in all, this novel is certainly a decent read if you like novels such as Kumo Desu ga, Nani ka!? and Epic of Caterpillar then give this one a shot.

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Its an interesting read with a few errors or very small plotholes here and there. The story is qute interesting though in my opinion its a bit too fast-paced (though that may only be me, i dont know). Either way, its a fun read so give it a try instead of staying here at the comments :)

Yes please make it a male MC😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋

great novel with enormous potential. the novel progresses well so far and the story progression is smooth and consistent with better battles than most novels on the site.

Beautiful !! I was extremely happy knowing that this is free since I'm a poor lad

the book is fun and enjoyable while it lasts, the ending isn't the most satisfying though in my opinion.

Reading from cordelia’s point of view has been amazing, I have loved the overall progression of this world, and would love to see more from all of these characters!!