Reviews of Life Travelling Through Fiction
Life Travelling Through Fiction
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I was gonna rate it 3.5 stars, but the quality DRASTICALLY improves from the MHA arc and it becomes very good! The first arcs are a bit written like a diary, which is weird, but at the MHA arc, the writing style completely changes!
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I only got to chapter 6 and had to call it quits on the fact it's less of a story and more of a brief description of what's happening. The pokemon fights aren't even explained it's just 'the gym was focused on rock so with my plant and water it was an easy win' not going into detail to explain the fights. All in all it reads like I'm reading the MC's daily diary.
Hi, First of all i want to say that the new vantage point you give to the readers, feels like an extremely fresh picture, i enjoy a lot reading it. I had read like 15 Fan Fictions (transmigration, reincarnation, World traveling etc...) that had Excelent Reviews and a lot of views, but the one that I had enjoyed the most is this. Just keep your way to see the things; because you're amazing
This story is really good in some aspects, and really quite bad in others. For the good things: The grammar and spelling is pretty much perfect, and scenes are written in a way that you can easily understand and visualise what's going on. The premises and plot threads of each jump were really interesting (except for the pokemon world, which was rather bland, but even that had the cool idea of megastones being compared to evolution stones and being made permanent at the end). I mean, kicking the humans out of the far north and repopulating the giants, freeing Kurogiri from his mind control and becoming his apprentice, kidnapping Azula and swapping her role with Zuko's, all of these are top tier ideas. (I didn't read the Mass Effect arc since I never played the game and didn't see the point in powering through it since it was the last arc, anyway). The background worlds are very consistent with the canons', and have reasonable and well thought out outcomes in relation to the butterflies of the mc. There are lots of chapters, which is always a good thing. For the bad things: This gets better as the story goes on, but at the start the story is very very rushed. It feels more like the outline to the story rather than reading an actual story at times. This problem started to get better during the mha arc and was pretty much gone during the avatar arc, though. The second problem, I think is related to the first. The mc has no personality. During the first arcs, everything was more like a summary of what the mc did without exploring his mindset while doing it, or showing his conversations with others. Then, because of this, when the quality started to improve, there was no personality to build off of so he turned out super boring. In the mha world, it's like he's acting professionally all the time. In the avatar world, it's a little better, but still pretty bad. Like, even though there's romance, it's more like "by the way, we're dating now" than any sort of flirting or blushing or exploring their feelings or, well, anything, really. So, yeah. Good in some aspects and bad in others, but imo the good outweigh the bad and the bad slowly get better as the story goes on.
La historia esta buena pero tiene 2 cosas muy molestas 1. Las charlas no estรกn marcadas y aveces no sabes quien dijo que 2. Aveces entre relatar algo como un suceso pasa directamente a como si estuviera diciendo el futuro no hay forma de identificar cuando de un monรณlogo de pensamiento salta a una descripciรณn de salto de tiempo Estas dos cosas hicieron que la lectura fuera difรญcil aveces estaba leyendo y resultรณ muy errรกtico, serรญa bueno tener en cuenta
I'm kinda stuck here, I want to rate it lower because most of it is not that great, but the avatar arc just seems really good. If I was a reasonable person, I would wait for more to rate it, but I'm not that patient. Hopefully the quality keeps up. One thing that's great (maybe perfect, I skipped a lot), is the grammar and spelling. Too many stories just hurt to read with authors that have a grossly insufficient knowledge and/or experience of English. No one should have any problems trying to understand what the author is trying to convey, which I appreciate.
Cthulhu approved, jokes aside is an amazing story love the story telling a little like a dairy and kinda of boring in the beginning buuuuut trust me it gets way but just tough it out for a few chapters. summon Cthulhu "Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn!" somnia aeternae vocare possit aeternam tenebrarum obscurum. ut omnes moriuntur magnificentiam aeternae adorare.
