Comments of chapter undefined of Life In Another World

Good start.

Good chapter

May I abuse this comment to tell the Author that the Synopsis seems… generic? There's nothing unique in there. Maybe this will just be your cliche isekai, but I recon making it a bit more outstanding and unique would be a good idea.

I admire you have chosen to share your first story. I'm not sure if you are writing in English or if the work is being translated, but there are several errors which make reading difficult. A program like Grammarly could help eliminate several of the problems such as using past and present tense in the same sentence. I hope you take this as constructive and not petty criticism. You have made the first step of sharing a story of your own creation and that is wonderful.

Nice

Thanks for the chapter.

nice start

Thank you for the chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

Kind of interesting

Nice start good way to give his background

Exp

Kill us to death....... ................................ People die when they are killed?

Exp

A nice narration author! Keep it up!....

Thx

Thank you for the chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

i like the prelude s lot the story is promissing