Comments of chapter undefined of Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World
Loved it but Im done. That Tournament and this chapter annoyed me far more then they probably should have. He is an assassin, an ***** (i think?), and he was goaded into this fight because someone hit him and said a few words? Really? And in previous chapters, his fight made no sense. Merely the rule of allowing damaging hits but a solid hit Means a win is stupid, especially when lightning is involved. All he had to do was fire a sufficently strong blast, -!:, unless the instructor can move faster than lightning (if you want me to go into the physics of that i can), then the ither guy should have died. she let him take a hit that severed his foot without stopping it, but punching teeth out is excessive force? People are getting hit by blunt rocks moving so fast they cant dodge them...somehow not breaking bones, and yet a punch to the face is to much force? Story has been great but these past chapters just.....idk. thought id just leave a comment and not a review since it would have been an angry and illogical one. if you have sound reasoning for why it went like it did id love to hear it and maYbe id keep reading. keep writing its preTty good tho.
The story was interesting but between the teacher's blatant favoritism...and yes she chose sides...and no one stopping a third year from bullying first years.. yeah, I'm gone. As for choosing sides; she allowed Arg to use as much force as he liked against the MC but interfered and disqualified the MC for attempting to use the same level of force. She then disqualified the Panther for winning. Yes, for winning. It was the first solid hit and non-lethal.
mc fails the very criteria of being an assasin i.e a certain amount of control over his emotions. Asassination is not as simple as getting to your target and killing him/her, honestly, you could have just made him a normal teenager with a father who is a retired killer and it would fit him perfectly đŹ
Youâre all over the place with this.... I think you need to do a lot of research regarding what an assassin is like. Assassinâs dont act like shounen protagonists... if this is supposed to be one, then sure but cmon... you said he was raised to be an assassin since childhood, none of this chapter would have happened the way it did for a real assassin. While i enjoy the little romance at stuff with Cat Girl its weird that he gets so flustered. Heâs an assassin meant to control his emotions perfectly... i honestly dont get your character. Plus, the match before with the MC should have ended at the foot hit. Teacher stopped just before he could land a hit but showed favouratism to the other guy. Thats fine. But then you say after Cat girl landed a hit like that The teacher struggled to Hold back laughter? Why are you contradicting your characters?
