TriangulatedCake
A very enjoyable story with plenty of background and color to add to its wonderful sexual nature. A likeable main character and a sweet supporting cast. The overall story and plot are refreshing and make for smooth reading. Other than a couple spelling or grammar issues that could be solved with grammarly or the like, it is solid to read. I can't say that about a lot of the stories I read, so it greatly bumps the experience. I am greatly enjoying this work and hope to follow it and see it grow. Seems like a wonderful long haul story that could likely deliver 300 or so chapters. Overall, I can completely recommend. Oh, and the *** is wonderfully explicit and drawn out.
First Of All. This Novel Is Great. I Know Most Of The People that read This Novel Because Of The Smut Scene But Damn. Really im Interest More in The plot I Want to see the MC Explore The Entire Forest and maybe Go To Some Sort Of kingdom Or Something So Yeah Great Novel HopeFully The Author Keep updating Constantly
The story Is really interesting It stats off with a girl that is horny and didn’t know how to satiate her her hunger for master bating so she‘s always fingering to the point where she misses school and other things in life .After going to the bathroom because had to finger herself she is transported to game like world that she had been playing. This game like World is where she first thought that needed to start farming but it then turned into more than just that ..................I say the story over all is a little frustrating at times but it is enjoyable and I’m to keep reading the story .
At first, I thought this novel was lame sauce and way too wordy. Then it got better and better increasing in diversity and following in a logical way. Not jumping from idea to idea with no logical or witnessable transition. The grammar isn't bad even if they use online slang, it's a great story that's plenty lewd.
After several chapters, I think I should update my review * Cough * The story continues on the right track, at times events happen too fast but that does not prevent you from enjoying the slow chapters. As for the R scenes, they are well written and the author lets his imagination fly with what the protagonist can do or can do to her (yes, she is f * cked by a beast) As for the updates they are somewhat inconsistent but when the author tries hard, you have many chapters insured With all that said, author, keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more.