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Bobby_pierce

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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce3d
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    Truely, she had never seen anything like the dark crystal before. It had so many mysterious properties! And the wood, if she didn't have the [Linguist] ability granted by the ROB that enabled her to understand the symbols that were carved for sealing it, she wouldn't have been able to come up with a way to open it all. She had never seen anything similar to them before.
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    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Commented

    hey author you may want to change this part about damaging the dungeon. in the danmachi world once the dungeon itself it's damaged enough beyond just chipping or scratches it will summon a juggernaut to protect itself and destroy the being who damaged it to that extent

    Moreover, after eliminating Goliath, the stream of light continued its unstoppable power and bombarded the Sighing Wall, creating a colossal cavern several times the size of Goliath, deep and unfathomable.
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    Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon
    Anime & Comics · Metarln
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Replied to Bobby_pierce

    alternatively use batman detective vision unlock condition solve a previously unsolved or mishandled case

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Replied to Bobby_pierce

    properly guess information of a certain amount of unknown things and be correct. ex correctly guess the purpose of a gadget or machine ect

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
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    unlock condition: force someone to confess their sins or discover a person's hidden sin

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Replied to Bobby_pierce

    unlock condition: help heal or give first aid to a living being upgrade condition: heal certain amount of living beings

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Replied to Bobby_pierce

    unlock condition: make someone who has sinned a lot or committed a major sin confess or fear you upgrade method make a certain amount of sinners repent or face their sins

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Posted

    please include somewhere in your title or synopsis that this is a cobra Kai fanfic as just having dragon warrior as a title or description for the world involving kung fu may have others mistake this for a kung fu panda fic.

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    The Dragon Warrior.
    Movies · SrCuervo
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Commented

    penance stare og user: the ghost rider uses: the user looks into the eyes of a sinner and makes them live through the sins as the person the sinned against making them live through the pain they caused to others limits: the stronger the person is compared to the user determines how many sins the target goes through weakness: if the user is majorly stronger than the target and the target has many heinous sins it can lead to mental over load of target to the point of knocking them out or in extreme cases death

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Commented

    eyes of a Saint or healers eyes uses: able to heal others in the user's line of sight limits: the more serious the injury the longer it will take to heal and healing uses some of the user's stamina and strains the eyes the longer its used. weakness: if over used can lead to temporary blindness while the eyes recover from the strain

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Commented

    eyes of sin or sinners eyes og user: the ghost rider ability: allows the user to see the amount of sins someone has committed in their life and focusing on the targets sins allows the user to precisely see all of those accumulated sins limits: only works on people within a certain distance weakness: focusing to see all of a individuals sins forces the user to watch all of that person's sins for the user he watches it like they are happening in real time to others he stares for a few seconds

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce1mth
    Commented

    eyes of analysis or analytic eyes allows the user to receive various bits of information regarding the things he is looking at depending on how much he wants to know uses: can allow him to know information of people or objects such as names, history, quirk, ect limits: gets more information the longer the user stares at the target. weakness: over use leads to uneeded or useless information being given as well and can cause sensory over load

    (Eye suggestions and their conditions here.
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Darkened007
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce3mth
    Posted

    one of the better novels I have read for it unique story line. most would make a story like this but with society having experienced the cataclysmic event years earlier and discovered beast taming a few years after the event but before the story begins this book however took a different route where the mc is at the beginning of the apocalypse/ cataclysmic event and due to a unique power uncovered hidden details and beast taming. honestly I like this because it's not just copy and pasting basically the same thing as everyone else and it's a cut above all those zombie apocalypse setting books. I hope the author of this book will eventually come back to either finish their book or realse more like it. I say with a bit of effort, time, and experience you could create an actual book and publish it.

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    The Strongest Beast Tamer
    Fantasy · FlamingWolf0
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce3mth
    Posted

    did you seriously need to go and post someone else's work as your own. on the same platform they posted it on

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    Worlds Unbound: A Gamer’s Quest
    Anime & Comics · Daoist57YPnD
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce3mth
    Commented

    for an dinosaur take over form while ark is good for it, for the purpose you are writing it for I suggest you look at a cartoon series called dinosaur King, each of the dinosaurs in the series has a element they are connected with

    Ch 27 Chapter 25
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    Fairy Tail: Wandering Beast
    Anime & Comics · Indra_effect7020
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce3mth
    Posted

    a great story with a unique basis for powers and a great pacing where the Mc isn't a edge lord or instantly op or insanely weak.

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    Fairy Tail: Wandering Beast
    Anime & Comics · Indra_effect7020
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce3mth
    Replied to AlchemyBeast

    it took me 2 years to realize you meant neamean lion. the lion Hercules kills as one of his 12 labors

    Ch 10 chapter 9
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    dropped for now
    Movies · Bobby_pierce
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce3mth
    Replied to SigmaStoicstudent

    indomitable will system where the Mc will be given templates, items, skills, abilities, memories from different characters in the multiver whose wills are their strength. ex vageta, goku, naruto, ichigo, medoriya, etc. the Mc will do different missions or repeated actions related to a character to gain something from them for example the mcs exercise routine being like rock Lee's "if I cannot do a hundred push ups then I must do 200 sit ups." then he will get something from Lee, like his physic, memories of training, his training equipment, techniques.

    Ch 1 ddff
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    (fu2/4
    Anime & Comics · SigmaStoicstudent
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce4mth
    Commented

    in dc with a power allowing the user to either use the quirks of different mha characters or to assume their forms

    Ch 2 jgd
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    (fu2/4
    Anime & Comics · SigmaStoicstudent
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  • Bobby_pierce
    Bobby_pierce4mth
    Replied to Bobby_pierce

    I have a overworking imagination that causes me to think of different what if stories like this so I have many such ideas for stories these are just the most recent and ones I haven't wrote yet in my Google docs to never see the light of day

    Ch 1 ddff
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    (fu2/4
    Anime & Comics · SigmaStoicstudent
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