Reviews of Husband's lovely wife
Husband's lovely wife
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The moment i read the title i already Assumed that this is a doting husband novel with a mysterious FL, but the more i read the more the story gets interesting..is very different in a very nice way..althougt at forst i got distracted with oir authors POV but thankfully it was taken out.. i really love this story..very much recommended..๐๐๐๐ Just curious though..will this take lots of chapters?like hundreds maybe?..
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I hate rape and stupid male who doesn't trust fl, having mistress. But I don't think in your story I have to worry about those. And the leads r lovely. I must say ur novel doesn't lacking anything. I want to recommend this novel to everyone. Trust me this novel really worth the space of ur library. ๐๐ฅฐ๐ต
Love the story line and was very into it. Then i hit the "waiting to release chapters" phase when i got caught up. Very dissapointing. When someone controls the release and stops me from being able to read as i like, i start losing interest. This is falling into that. To wait only to get 1-2 chapters is monotonous and im starting to lose interest just because to fill my reading time, i started a new book... that is completed. I then firget where i was at and what was happening here in this one, therefore i have lost my connection with the characters. Sadly, I'm on the verge of just giving up on this book because i cannot read how much i want at any given time.
The story has potential but it needs revisions and go through editing and proofreading. The many grammatical errors and a lack of punctuation marks is decreasing the writing quality. The dialogues also need revisions and could be made simple and straight instead of trying to verbalize every small thought. Also, the pacing is too quick. The story is progressing rapidly without even establishing the characters thoroughly. Take your time and paint the main leads fully and then slowly dive into the story. All the best.
That was an interesting story and the starting chapter got me hooked up with the novel. Author did a great job coming to descriptions and the writing quality is also good. Story development is also well in pace. Author did a good job and keep up the good job till the end dear author. I'm cheering for you!!!
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When I read the summary of this story I find it boring coz I thought the FL is kind of weak AND Just a submissive one towards her husband.. I thought wrong coz this story is so amazing and exciting to read .. This story makes me curious about the story behind their past.. It's makes me want to read more๐. The saying "don't judge the book by its cover" it's true coz the content of this story is a amazing one to read๐
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ต๐คฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ just speechless
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