Review Detail of KCChakry in Husband's lovely wife

The story has potential but it needs revisions and go through editing and proofreading. The many grammatical errors and a lack of punctuation marks is decreasing the writing quality. The dialogues also need revisions and could be made simple and straight instead of trying to verbalize every small thought. Also, the pacing is too quick. The story is progressing rapidly without even establishing the characters thoroughly. Take your time and paint the main leads fully and then slowly dive into the story. All the best.