K_ur_e
It’s actually all not that bad, to be honest. I am actually quite enjoying the characters so far as I feel like they are not just robots so far that is. Also, at this point you might as well add the mother to the harem. Hahaa!! Anyways, keep up the work. I kind of wish the chapters were longer, or maybe I just read too fast. Oh well.
friend I can see that you have a good world stage and an interesting main character with an idea of his interesting personality, but you are going to the bad side of the casanova, you should not do it from those who only lie are arrogant and leave women lying, do it a casanova who is trustworthy and who takes care of all women, that's the real casanova not the arrogant young master you have as mc It would also be good if you could get more chapters and you could start charging coins to motivate yourself more, if it is worth what you will continue to write clearly.
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