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To be your first novel you are doing very well, I do not want you to think badly of me but I recommend that you read or take some references from Madara Uchija in MHA, romance is very good especially since it is not an OP to easily do everything. = == It is your novel and I like it, I just give you a suggestion. ==== And it is very interesting One Punch Man, I have never seen a fanfiction of the bald man with a cape in MHA. To all this thanks for reading so far, you are a genius ππππππ
It just isnβt good it goes to fast and just throws things in . The way the characters act arenβt natural . Some times it seems forced . The lemon scenes are just the bare bone with nothing to it even if itβs the author first time . The only good thing about it is the idea of one punch in my hero but thatβs still very basic and has been done with other characters powers tons of times .
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This one of my favorite my hero academya fan fictions the main character is good that he does not care about the main story and please do more original things like the gangs arc please do more of that and please please I beg you donβt do a harem I really like his relationship with momo thatβs everything I have to say please donβt drop