Reviews of Agartha - Quest for the Legacy

I love the way author-san expressed the story... and the story is developing very nicely. can't wait for the next chapter...cliffhangers are the one I hate most..author-san do not do this to us...

AWESOME...Read it. Let me start with telling why, so in the very first chapter you're like.. hmmmm? Why? What're they trying to do? So from the first chapter your curiosity piqued up and the second chapter 😂😂 has my favorite part, I love the storylines where a small looking animal defeat an undisputed king, a lion and later it turns out that the small looking animal is actually................ (read the second chapter if you want to know what I mean). Story is set up in modern times and have friendship, competition, college so definitely not hard to relate. All in all, a good work that I am going to read and add in my library.

Nice novel with great story development but there is this development for the character design. Though, it's quite early to say this. Waiting for next chapters.... waiting for new chaps

An amazing story about fantasy and magic. Right off the bat the mystery that surrounds the setting that the author has created makes you want to keep reading. I love how caring Brad is shown to be and interaction between their family. It is a wonderful story and I look forward to how it develops. Keep up the good work.

Wow, not only is the start great and compelling, it draws you in, I really want to see more and more of it. I cant wait to know what happens , I like how you dont do a massive information drop at once , and we have to find out as we go along.

Amazing book!!! I would totally read again and again. i fell in love with this after only three chapters!!!! The arts amazing, just every thing is amazing and i just love it

Great story and thank you for novel.

This reminds me of the Archaic System novel. filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler

Writing quality :- good Chapter updates:- excellent Well designed characters Good beginning Keep up the good work author

I haven't started this book yet but I'm sure it would be great.. knowing the author.. 😊 Keep up the goodwork dear author and more blessings for you!😊😊😊😊

Normally books have only strong MC and show that people around them are all damsels in distress. But here side characters are also strong which makes me more curious. And I wonder what will happen to MC and how he will reach the legacy of the emperor. And so on . And I also have to say the grammer is very good. Normally original novels wouldn't have good grammer but this book is exception. I hope author will go on with her hard work. If anyone is contemplating whether they should read or not then I suggest them to read. And guys u won't regret reading this.

An action-packed novel with good world-building and compelling characters! This is definitely a novel worth your time to read. I won't spoil any of the goodies, but once you start it, it will draw you in. Give this novel a try!

I must say, great book. Although your synopsis kinda got me confused or I don't know a little disinterested. But needless to say, I am happy I read on. Synopsis is good, same as the writing quality, stability of updates great. Your world background, character design and story development all great. Now review proper. I love you knack for detailed description. You did a good job there. Writing quality is good perhaps would need more work but I know with time you would be better. Author has a knack for suspense. The beginning suspense held already.. Then venturing into the modern day, where we see college bully and 5 skinny group of friends in action. Author plunges us into another suspense when MC takes a dream or mind calk vacation... Leaving his parents worries. From the few chapters I av read, yeah I can say good work. My only problem though, is the bulky paragraph. You need to work on reducing them. Perhaps in your free time, edit them and shorten the paragraphs. I used to do something similar but writers advised me. All in all, added ur book to my library... Anoda lengthy review I didn't plan. Good job, keep it up.

Nothing much I could really critique. Definitely a hidden gem. Dynamic characters are paired with a consistent and good writing. Definitely a must-read! I recommend it to anyone who wants to find a good story here in WN. All I could say is good job, and keep up the good work!

I like the pacing of the story. There are some grammatical errors/ typo along the way but you can polish that when editing. The pacing is just right, which I admire because I'm still trying to find the perfect balance in writing addicting chapters and slowing down and giving the readers a breather. One tip I got from the whole novel is to show the scenes vs telling! If you are able to do that, I feel like your story would be more amazing :)

So what to say about this book aprat from the fact that it amazing and brilliant. So its got magical realism in the really world. So its great. You should read this book.

it has a nice start and has the potential to go on nicely .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I wonder what is going to happen, I mean a modern story is going to be magical? You know being reader it is the curiosity that kills👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

First thing first, I have read the other book from the same reader and it was very good so I do have some expectations for this one, and it was proven thta it doesn't disappoint me despite being a different genre. This book started out mysterious before turning it's point to the MC carrying out actions. The MC is strong, calm, and lowkey. The intro is very good. Looking for further development, fighting!

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