The story is great! The plot gets even better as the story progresses. The characters also felt genuine and not too stereotypical. There are few chapters but intriguing pace and almost no grammatical mistakes. I hope that there would be more chapters in the future! Keep up the good work!

Duh! Isn't that a trade? What greater profits? what investing?

...Duh! I see people are expressing their dissatisfaction towards his mother. Man, I wonder how the earth would be if everyone is same as commenters expressed.

Nice start. promising prologue. let's see if it's any interesting as prologue.

Hmm...I give the novel this rating. First of all the grammar is smooth enough for a good read. Author has done good work to make this work a potential masterpiece. Now why I called it a masterpiece?? Here it is. This is the only book that made me feel like buying chaps if it goes premium. Overall it's so good. Keep it going, I'mma support you from shadows mate.

Let's see...

Nice start!

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The story is great! The plot gets even better as the story progresses. The characters also felt genuine and not too stereotypical. I hope that there would be more chapters in the future! Keep up the good work!

So Aire is going to go through lot of phases before he could become OP, or is he going to be your average Joe like now?

If your tired off all the same plot, and dumb mc that is only alive, cuz of plot armor and power up out the a** this is the story. This deserves to be a book from the original origins of the story and because it will literally blow u mind. Just love mc doesn't make dumb mistake doesn't hide got strength thru killing himself training day and night not sum system.

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Cultivation seems normal. Expecting some good cultivation system.

Man, sounds like a government.

This is a nice novel, however this translation leaves much to be desired. The quality of the novel is greatly reduced because of the lacking translation.

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Nice work!

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Good start!