SuperHippo
Hey! The book is amazing, I just noticed a small grammar error in chapter one (I stopped when I noticed it because I need to help a fellow author out) when Dio and Rex are entering the bunker and Rex is talking about how it would be a whole new ecosystem if the cave went down farther, his name isn’t capitalized in the sentence after that! Before posting chapters I recommend reading it before you publish it and carefully looking for errors. Anyways I hope you can help me in the future as I helped today! Keep writing you have an awesome talent.
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